MA1 rough draft

My project responds to prompt 2, “shitty first drafts advice column”
I believe I’m over halfway through the drafting process, it could be finished but I’m unsure of the specific outlines of the paper, how long it needs to be, perspectives, formatting, etc.
I am somewhat happy with my project but if I knew more details I would be happier
I would like direct feedback on how realistic the column is and if I need to add more detailed personal examples, etc.
Any feedback is welcomed!